Last breathe



My last breathe has risen above the stars
My tears have fallen at your feet
Can you hear me calling for you?
I need you at a moment like this

When my knees have given out

And I can no longer pray.

Can you hear me calling?

I need you.

About this poem

Needing love, comfort. Loss of mother and father

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Written on August 15, 2017

Submitted by Dkg_kri on July 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAX X X X A
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 226
Words 50
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 1, 1, 1

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