If the world was...

Drishti goel 2008 (Uttar pradesh)



Wouldn’t it be so nice if the world was
As simple as living with Doraemon,
There wasn't any tension, and everybody had fun
No temper, no fear...
And everyone was dear.
 
Wouldn’t it be any better if?.
Not a single person lived in orphanages,
No one held any grudges.
Everyone lived happily
No one lost their family!
 
I wish there were no discriminations
None of us suffered any complications…
There was nothing such as hatred.
No one’s talent was wasted!
 
But shall I say this with sorrow?
These are only thoughts one can think!
Now, my pen is out of ink
So.. I'll end the poem with a blink.

About this poem

I originally written this poem in the year 2021. About the poem I think the title conveys it all..in this I convey my thoughts about how I think the world may be have been..thanks for reading :)

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Written on January 05, 2021

Submitted by Somebuddy11 on July 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCC XDDEE AXFF XGGG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 581
Words 109
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 4

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