Take away



In the moments of dawn,
I heard birds chirping with joy
Flowers smiling at thy grace,
I watched darks defeated from a ray of light,
Watching this I got a thought,
I am also part of this eternal light,
Still these darks defeat me,
My vigor is vast like this sky,
Then why little pains make me cry,
Thou bedewed my body with showers of spring,
Still my soul is a lot thirsty,
Thou gave me smiles like silvery fret,
And I never shared them a bit,
O God absolve me of my desires,
I want to grow to remove darks,
I want to bestrew showers of smile,
Give me a touch of thy,
And take away I of my.
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Submitted by my_broken_words on June 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEDFGGHFIJKCLGG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 573
Words 120
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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