Oh to love the one you deserve
This was meant to be a love poem, full of jollity,
To blame is my own laxity and your betrayal
To fight you have to dirty yourself, and
To be hurt you must love
Now these lights blind my tear-filled eyes,
reminiscing a faint moment when we both felt the same
You chose his scars to my liniment,
His veiled lies to my naked truth
I warned us of the spear of despair slicing our hearts,
but the spear never reached your chest
For love without hopes and expectations,
is but a gift a cheater imparts on themselves
You left me, to return to the one
you seeked refuge from
Composed of emptiness, my mind sprinting through
the labyrinth of doubt and pain
With a tempest within me, crestfallen,
hope is all there was
Longing like the dawn for the sun,
I had had too much of a sweet poison
Held captive by my mind, when my thoughts had just unlocked my cuffs,
I allowed you to fasten my padlocks
Woe to your love that doesn't last,
now I am too incomplete to give someone my all
I can cry and blame you for hours
but the truth is I wasn't him,
If I was him I would've pestered you to death like him
If I was him I would've controlled you to dependence like him
If I was him I would've betrayed you to insanity like him
If I was him I would've played with you to fatigue like him
And If I was like him I would've loved you so fake like him
Fleeing from the shadows of my past,
with darkness as my only abode
you merely said the words and I meant it
pure, it was, which I'll preserve
Oh to love the one you deserve,
Oh to love the one you deserve.
About this poem
This is my first poem. It is based on my experience. I might've used some clichés or weak words but this was written in one sleepless night and I thought it's worth publishing. There's no rhyme scheme. It's free verse.
Submitted by poetish_ly on June 17, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ax ax xx ax xa xx bx xx bx bb xx ax xcccccc aa ad DD |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,504 |
Words | 307 |
Stanzas | 16 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 7, 2, 2, 2 |
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