LOVE SICK



When our lips met my soul screemed
my heart closed and cracked open
again with fear melting through my thoughts
like water running off a roof.
My shoulders trembled with fear all the
way from my finger tips to my toes.
All this time my memory was fading away
from the experience that night witch gave
me the power to change. My mind rippled
like fire on ice in my heart which got
chewed up and spit out by you once and
I had to glue it back together. I closed
my eyes late at night only hoping to open
them to you once again. Although my dreams
made it clear to me. Every moment spent
without you is like hell frozen over.
I'll wait for ever for you cause I know
you will be in my arms once more...
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Submitted by edwardc.85723 on May 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHAAAABIAJKL
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 681
Words 140
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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