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When people give up

Ari Dean 2009 (Canterbury)

When you are all alone in the world-
People will be there in a whirl
To help and protect you
Anytime when things are blue
 
When people get tired
They feel like twisted wires
They might need a break
Over a dinner of steak
 
If you need them too much
You might be out of luck
Because they could give up.
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Submitted on May 31, 2021

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Scheme XXAA XXBB XXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 290
Words 61
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3
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