Analysis of Walk A little Plainer, Daddy

Christy Hollis 1960 (Texas)



Walk a little plainer, Daddy
Said a little boy so frail
I'm following in your footsteps
And I don't want to fail.
Sometimes your steps are very plain,
Sometimes they are hard to see
So walk a little plainer, Daddy
For you are leading me.
I know you that once you walked
This way many years ago,
And what you did along the way,
I'd really like to know
For sometimes when I am tempted
I don't know what to do
So walk a little plainer, Daddy
For I must follow you.
Someday when I'm grown up
You are like I want to be.
Then when I have a little boy...
Whom will want to follow me.
And I would want to lead him right,
And help him to be true.
So walk a little plainer, Daddy
For we must follow you.
                                           By Christy Hollis


Scheme abcbdaAaefgfhiAijakaliAim
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 10101010 1010111 1100011 011111 01111101 0111111 110101010 111101 1111111 1110101 01110101 110111 10111110 111111 110101010 111101 11111 1111111 11110101 1111101 01111111 011111 110101010 111101 11010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 733
Words 145
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 544
Words per stanza (avg) 145
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