Analysis of You Hear Me, Don’t You?



Let me go.
Release my mind.
Freedom from your cold grip.

Escape has never been an option.
It is an impossible struggle
To sit in your dark shadow pleading.

You never hear my words.
I can hurt you,
Don’t test my strength
For it is you who will fail.

I no longer wish to be in your presence
Or feel the pain that you cause.
A plague you are,
Bringer of death.

My death will not be among them.
An end to this madness,
I will bring this upon you
For ignored I remain.

Mercy is not a gift
To be given to you,
For you have destroyed
All patience I had.


Scheme XXX XXX XAXX XXXX XXAX XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 0111 101111 011101110 111010010 11011110 110111 1111 1111 1111111 11101110110 1101111 0111 111 11111011 111110 1111011 101101 101101 111011 11101 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 532
Words 112
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by PathofStars on May 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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