Analysis of The Murder ......



What I saw a kerchief and a cap!
The cop says the murderer own,
Beside them lie a girl with no move,
And I stand dumbstruck  down.
“Steve” the cops called rudely,
Came the man behind the scene,
His eyes were wet but no traces,
Of being sorry for what he had been.

The police asked “didn’t you see that face”
How innocent she was and her dead body,
For she lied down not knowing what happened,
For she was killed by her own Father in custody.
“What” I wondered a father killing a daughter!
Being the most suspected cases ever…..
And I moved on with the file left open,
Got the man’s explanations clever..

He stated” I killed my own daughter,
For she was the only one I had,
As mine in the whole world with my blood,
And I am supposed to die in a day to add,
I don’t want to let her live alone,
For the people here are not to wipe her tears,
But to wipe her girliness down to pieces,
And give her the worst in the world to bear.
I let the doors of heaven open for her,
As a father I didn’t know where to leave her,
Whom to rely her upon as none else me is her father,
Let the god and the cops punish me right here,
Deep down  I know we will have a life,
There, where no death conquers me nor my girl,
A father and a daughter living happily ever after…….

Am I struck or sad for fate took the father’s side,
His lips was sealed forever to not utter a word,
Before I even  completely close  the FIR case file,
This was the most  pathetic case ever in my cord.
“Dear god you hear a lot of prayers everyday,
These  two plead you too heartily  down,
You didn’t hear them dear God ,
You didn’t hear them……..


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Poetic Form
Metre 111010001 01101001 011101111 01111 101110 1010101 11011110 1101011111 001111111 11001100110 1111110110 1111101100100 111001010010 10010101010 0111101110 10101010 110111110 111010111 110011111 011011100111 111110101 10101111101 111011110 0100100111 11011101010 10101111110 110100111111010 10100110111 111111101 1111101111 0100010101001010 111111110101 1111010111001 0111001010111 1101010110011 11110111101 111111001 111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,603
Words 320
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 15, 8
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 302
Words per stanza (avg) 82
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Anagha krishnan

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