Analysis of When nobody was there, God almighty was always there



When nobody was there, God almighty was always there
And when nobody will remain, He will always be there
May be have a question, why is it so, why will he be there?
As He's  Supreme in command knows when it to exercise

He has created this Universe from nothingness!
When he wanted to create, He said 'be and it became!
This Universe was created in no time; it is still there
He's in command, creates anything, as & when He likes

He is super supreme in command to create as he wishes
If anyone thinks there is a rival, absolutely has no sense
Bodies are created from dust, soul is eternal to be there
We're given a life are limited in time concept to be aware

Surprisingly there is 'A life after death' we don't believe in
A reality, no doubt in it we don't believe in life after death
With new technology we gone mad; gave up the concept
It's aggravating social life by living a wasteful life in vain

We human beings with intellect must live life ethically
Don't follow illogical ways with unproductive activities.
Just go back and find out how happy were we living happily
Despite there were no new gadgets in hand to surf data at will.


Scheme AAAX XXAX XXAA XXXX BXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111010111 01110111111 111010111111111 1101001111110 110101101100 11101011110101 11010100111111 100101101111 1110010011011110 110111010010111 1010101111010111 11001110001101101 0100110110111010 0101101110101101 11010011111010 1100101110010101 110101101111000 1100100110100100 1110111100110100 0110111001111011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,123
Words 213
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted by Amirul on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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