Analysis of poem #8

David Plantinga 1972 (Sherbrooke)



The moon is grim and sly, and keeps
Pale secrets from her twin.  
She hides the darkest of her blushes
Behind a slivered grin.

Her greater, fertile, sister earth,
Greater in girth, not age,
Knows a pallid, pock-marked cheek
But not a shaded rage.  

A barren spinster, gray from birth,
Can scarcely bear to see
From callous sister such a show
Of broad fecundity.


Scheme XAXA BCXC BDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 01110101 110101 110101010 01011 01010101 100111 1010111 110101 01010111 110111 11010101 110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 358
Words 64
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by DavidPlantinga on May 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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