Analysis of My water and soil



A young me was planted
Like a seed and watered with  loving kindness.
And then I sprouted like a tree planted by the river named gladness .

The attention and nurturing
Was all a young me could ever wanted,  and you both gave it all and never parted

In what ways can I repay this deeds
What do I do to let you both know am grateful indeed
Everyday I will pray and be faithful as a kid.

My roots are deeply rooted into you. And My fruits are sweet today because of you. There ain't no way I can pay you back. A thousand gold coins can't do better than my grateful heart.

So Here is my hands take it, I be that tree that would always shade it. Love you both my water and soil.


Scheme ABB XA XXX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 011110 10101011010 0111010110101011 00100100 110111101001111101010 011110111 11111111111001 1011110110101 11110100110111101011111111111101011111011101 111111111111111111111001
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 671
Words 136
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Modified by Leocribs on May 01, 2021

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