Analysis of My story
Alicyn king 2007 (hartford)
DREAM
Well atleast i thought it was
But when i blinked twice i realized
It was reality sometimes i wish it
Was a dream
Im so hurt inside im like a broken plate
One that has shattered into a million pieces
One that doesn't seem like it can fixed
At night when i weep on my pillow staring
At the ceiling hoping that one day thing will get
Better hoping that one day my mom sees the good in me
And maybe not treat me like i'm different
Hoping all those memories of pain all those scars
Go away
Do u know how it feels to be let down??
Do u know how it feels to be told
Your hated
Your not wanted
I wish i never had u
Do you know how it feels to be told every day in your ears that you are gonna be disowned ?
Do u know how it feels to be a young child hoping that mommy calls u on your birthday or maybe even a holiday ?
Do u know the embarrassment of going out in public with your mom and she knows nth about u not even how to spell your name ?
And no she has not been absent out my life shes been right here but honestly she hasn't
The feeling the hurt the pain will never go away no doctor no therapy can help nth cuz there right there no matter how hard u try to bury them
I wanna run to u and hug u i wanna be special to u i want u to love me
But why do you hate me? Why did I do so wrong ??
WHY CANT U GET IM DYING INSIDE I HURTING I NEED A MOTHER NOT A HATER OR A disbaliver
Scheme | AXXXAXXXXXBCXDXXEEXXDXCXBX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1 111111 11111110 111001111 101 11101110101 111100101010 111011111 11111111010 101010111111 10101111110101 01011111100 101110011111 101 1111111111 111111111 110 1110 1111011 111111111100101111110101 11111111011101101111111010010 111001001101010111011101111011111 0111111011111111100110 01001011101011101100111111111011111101 11011101111011011111111 111111111111 111111001110110101010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,371 |
Words | 298 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 26, 1 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 533 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 151 |
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