Analysis of wish my dream



i want to meet you;
where nights and days have illuminated each other,
which voiceless colors have painted the endless sky.
always, we have been existing.

i know this dream will continue,
struggling its way; so painfully, so desperately,
waiting for its day of blossoming.

as you fly across the sky;
embrace the warmth in each other’s hands,
sparkle the love from each other’s eyes,
you will definitely put on a lovely smile.

although it would be beautiful,
it wouldn’t be mine anymore.


Scheme AXBC AXC BXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 110110100110 110101100101 1111010 11111010 10011110011000 101111100 1110101 010101101 100111101 111000110101 1111100 111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 480
Words 83
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on April 30, 2021

Submitted by dreamui on April 29, 2021

Modified by dreamui on October 07, 2021

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