Analysis of Aakhir kab thamega



Kab aisa socha tha,
Ki waqt aisa aayega
Ki Zindagi mushqil
Aur maut mazaak ho jaayegi

Kyon bhaag Rahi ho tum Zindagi
Kuch Apne Hain jo choot Gaye
Jaane Kahan Gaye pata Nahi
Jaane kidhar Gaye pata Nahi.

Jo kal tak fikr thi
Wo kab darr ban gayi
Jo kal tak umeed thi
Wo Aaj kyon khauff ban gayi

Kyun in logon Ka Yun beech Safar mein ,
Yun jaana zaroori tha,
Kya tujhe kuch sapnon ki tootne ki
Aawaz sunaai Nahi deti
Kya tujhe Yun toote aashiyaanen
Dikhaai Nahin dete

Kab rukega ye dardnaak manjar
Kahan thamega ye khauffnaak manjar.

Mamta Lalwani .


Scheme ABXC CDEE ADAD FABGFG HH F
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 110101 111 11111 111111 111111 101111 11111 11111 11111 11111 111111 10111111 1111 1111111 1111 11111 111 11111 011111 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 529
Words 102
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 6, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by mlalwani648 on April 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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