Analysis of Losing Sight



Losing sight of life is the easiest thing to lose in this world

When the moment comes and life is starting to pass you by how do you come back from the heartache and pain

So Lost from the moments before you don’t realize that the ones that have your best interest are the ones that are pushed outta sight

Fighting the lost is the hardest fight that you could imagine

While being concerned with the emotions that one goes through is the easiest way to shed the light on the sad and lonely tears

Reminiscing on the hurtful days and not forgetting to rejoice for the days that the world wiped your tears away

The emotion of losing sight can be as strong as the emotions of losing your mother or child

Who will wipe the tears of the lost people while they sit around and wonder who or what will be taken away next

A emotionless lost sight is the next thing to hate or even disgust

While the pain is still dwelling on the inside and the hate rises to another level

Is it all worth the pain and suffering or even the lost mindset of knowing that someone has completely lost sight of life


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Characters 1,074
Words 208
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 79
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on April 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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