Analysis of The Dirtsider and the Delphine

Charlene Delfin 1990 (Mandaluyong City)



It’s a quiet afternoon.

Peaceful so far, no more fights.

I’ve been staring here since noon,

Seeing many kinds of lights

Under many a grey moon,

Just thinking through days and nights.

Building whole worlds in silence,

Putting breaths in everyone,

Pausing a bit of cadence

To thank there wasn’t that one.

Her light mind shallow and dense,

She’ll be here when today’s done.

Leave, be away, dirtsider.

Let me think, dear outsider.

Don’t be such a loud bother.

Let the poet dream today

If I cannot make a song.

Let Earth roll to a new day

And don’t do anything wrong.

Let life be happy and gay.

Have the will to dance along.


Scheme A B A B A B C D C D X D E E E F G F G F G
Poetic Form
Metre 101001 1011111 1110111 1010111 1010011 1101101 1011010 101010 1001110 111111 0111001 1111011 11011 1111010 1110110 1010101 1110101 1111011 011101 1111001 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 613
Words 114
Sentences 12
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Charlene Delfin

Charlene Delfin is a Filipina poet and author who is a frequent participant of the annual Global Poetry Writing Month (GloPoWriMo). more…

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