Analysis of Invisible Shoes
Traveling in time
The mind is free to fly
One step behind
Going to the past for a while
No fairy tales are about to come
Swam songs are not mine to write
The sweet destiny of a prince is about to doom
And the key to the castle is out of sight
Can you hear and can you see?
One step behind I am about to be
I wish my life was so simple
In the empty world of invisible
Back in the word I write
Maybe two steps behind
Deeper in the past I fly
The clock ticks and I still try to find a reason to be
Take this nipple out of your face he said
While a child was laid to live
Or where a child was thought how to live
No complaints about the black and white were allowed
Can you hear and can you see?
I took one more step behind
And I am still looking for the colored blue skies
Invisible and unbelieved to the same eyes
Can you hear and can you see?
My footsteps gone with the sands of time
I am now walking many years ahead in time
Visible are my brand new small feet that play alive
Scheme | abcx xdxd Eeff dcbe xggx Echh Eaag |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (29%) |
Metre | 10001 011111 1101 10101101 110110111 1111111 0110010110111 00110101111 1110111 1101110111 11111110 0010110100 100111 101101 1000111 01101111101011 1110111111 1011111 110111111 101010101001 1110111 1111101 011110101011 0100011011 1110111 11110111 111101010101 1001111111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 952 |
Words | 208 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 109 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
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