Analysis of A Day In The Park



Walking down the alley of life
feeling all the essence i could receive
the fragrance of the leaves slapping over gently
my face when falling from the trees.

I keep walking with no rush along the verge
admiring all the beauty that God has made
it's sunny, it's cloudy, it's blue
the sky is on its prime for a wonderful day.

The pallet diverging colors
like a rainbow in the sun
pumping nature pure the green is
the master of the spring turning to hope.

I sat down in the bench listening clearly the birds
the crazy flying of the butterflies
the picking timing of the hummingbird
and the sun rising on my face.

After a beautiful day of lovely pictures
flashing in my eyes like an hourglass lost in time
now that i saw what some hours god could draw
you can imagine what he can fix in a whole life.


Scheme AXXX XXXX BXXX XXXX BXXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10101011 1010101101 010101101010 11110101 11101110101 01010101111 11011011 011111101001 01001010 101001 10101011 0101011011 1110011001001 010101010 010101010 00110111 100100111010 100111110101 11111110111 1101011110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 776
Words 152
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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