Analysis of My Inner Demon

Serenity Mondy 2006 (West Plains)



As they eat my lungs
And my chest
I start to wonder what is best
Die or Live
I need something to help me with this
There eating my fear
There eating my face
They say thing I don't want to hear
But can't stand the pain
The Angels gave up
But I don't want to lose
Someone give me a hand
Someone give me a boost
My inner demons can't hide
I can see them in the corner of my eye
The angels lost
The demons lost
I just feel numb
But I don't want to go on
If i'm wrong
Someone tell me it's okay to give up
Just as long as you don't lose the fight
Am I right?
                              -Serenity Mondy


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111 011 11110111 111 111011111 11011 11011 11111111 11101 01011 111111 11101 11101 1101011 11110010111 0101 0101 1111 1111111 111 11111111 111111101 111 010010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 577
Words 124
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 435
Words per stanza (avg) 124
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Submitted by AngelsHelper101 on April 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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