Analysis of For Ben



Do not cry, nor fear for one  
Passed beyond this life.
They've left this world and passed beyond
The torment, pain and strife.    

They've found themselves caught up again
In Father's loving arms.
He'll keep them close in his embrace
Apart from toil and harm.  

It's hard for us, those left behind,
Caught up in woe and grief;
We have work here on this earth
Before we find relief.  

Remember those past on before
To heaven's grand mansion;
For when we die, we meet again
A joyous reunion!

© Criss F. Rosenlof 5/30/2011
-I wrote this poem when we lost our second grandchild to hemorrhagic pneumonia at the age of 3 days old.


Scheme ABXB CXXX XDXD XACA BX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 10111 11110101 01101 11011101 010101 11110101 011101 11111101 110101 1111111 011101 01011101 110110 11111101 010010 111 11110111101011010010101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 627
Words 118
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 24
Font size:
 

Submitted by sifubear on April 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

37 sec read
3

Criss F Rosenlof

Criss has been writing poetry since a "Reflections" contest in the second grade. He has been married for over 30 years as of this writing, and has 4 children, and 8 grandchildren. more…

All Criss F Rosenlof poems | Criss F Rosenlof Books

1 fan

Discuss this Criss F Rosenlof poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "For Ben" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/97052/for-ben>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    22
    hours
    0
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who was “admirably schooled in every grace”?
    A Richard Cory
    B Odysseus
    C J. Alfred Prufrock
    D Miniver Cheevy