Analysis of That Melancholy Feeling

Jasmin Jay 2004 (Riverside California)



I’m Sad
I’m Sullen
I’m Saturated with this melancholy feeling

I Dread waking up
I Don’t want to dream
But I Doubt staying awake will help me with this melancholy feeling

I Cry at nothing
I’m Confused why
I Can’t Count the unhappy days
But then I’m Calm

Then I’m Nothing
Then I’m Numb
Now I’m without that melancholy feeling

But wait, nevermind, now I’m just without feeling at all


Scheme XXA XXA AXXX AXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11 110 11001110010 11101 11111 11110011111110010 11110 1011 11100101 1111 1110 111 1101110010 1110111011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 389
Words 70
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 3, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by Miss_Jay on March 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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