Analysis of Till Death Do Us Part, My Love



To live without you…
I'd rather go blind.
What we once had,
most people will never find

I’d rather not see the day.;
Starvation is the price I’m willing to pay.;
My lonely soul aches for your embrace.;
I have dreams of us at the alter, standing face to face.

As I gaze into your eyes,
that’s the way each morning should start.
I would go insane without you,
because you are my everything, you are my heart.

I can not imagine living if living is without you.
A situation like that
and there’s no telling what I would do.
If you could see me now, I’m confused and loss,
and I miss being around you so much.
I long for and miss your Enticing,Captivating touch.

I love your voice, your eyes, I even love your smile.
And waiting for your return….
believe me it’s worth the while.


Scheme ABXB CCDD XEAE AXAXFF GXG
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 11011 1111 1101101 1101101 01010111011 110111101 11111101010111 1110111 10111011 11101011 01111101111 111010101101011 001011 011101111 11111110101 0111001111 11101111 111111110111 0101101 0111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 798
Words 171
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 6, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by s.i.s on March 19, 2021

Modified by s.i.s on November 28, 2022

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Sarah Lateesha Hamilton

I am Proud American. I am a retired Army vet who served 20yrs defending the rights for our country. I'm a loving single mother and momma's girl. I put my family 1st. I have been writing poetry since the age of 10 and writing is my passion. I love to love. We only have one life ( that we can remember) so I live my life to the fullest more…

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