Analysis of Алма-Ата (in russian)



Город - принадлежит лишь ночи,
Чудак! Простым казаться хочет
Без пафосных речей - ничей, но
С каждым дружен...
Кому-то вечно безразличен,
Другим по-жизни нужен...

Он изменился за декаду смога,
Приток народа, гудки такси, и в сотый раз
Сменилась мода, без мимолётного прости...

Улыбка - для прохожих дика, пешком...
По тротуару через сквер...
Соседям по двору нельзя без криков
Мой город стражник...
Твой город лицемер...

Я тоже...поменялся, то осень, то весна...
Усыпана привычная дорога
Местами ярких впечатлений и хрониками дня

Как всё же не хватает...твоего задора...

Отрывки детства - то тут, то там
Их, сказочных - с каждым днём всё меньше...
Коллаж домов - иголки в сердце, хлам!
Артерии дорог при свете красочных реклам...

Мы снова вместе, тет-а-тет
Среди толпы, спокойны и на ты
Шаг в сторону и пируэт знакомый
Моя душа, твои мосты
Эмоции просты, все доводы весомы...

Здесь искры встреч и расставаний тени
Связь поколений, отношений, что не уберечь
А мы - всё те же, Город мой да я
Идём...привычною дорогой....
В золотых красках ноября...
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Poetic Form Palindrome
Metre 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Characters 1,840
Words 170
Sentences 20
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 5, 3, 1, 4, 5, 6
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 0
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 0
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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