Analysis of Your Touch Transforms Me



Your Touch Transforms Me
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 My head is resting on your flower
 Your hands do me velvet shower,
 Your heartbeat is melodious murmur
 Your warm lap raises my clouds tower

Your presence fill my empty space
 No need,no want no desire remains
 Nothing absent in your elegant grace
 Your smile enriches  me all the gains

Your touch makes me like your hue
 True sunshine reflects in morning dew
 Both of us are mingled to become blue
 In your body blanket,I am not I but You.

You transform me what I am not but you
 In your body blanket my soul becomes you

~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~~


Scheme X AAAA BCBC DDDD DD X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 1 111101110 11111010 111010010 111101110 11011101 111101001 1010011001 110101101 1111111 11010101 1111101011 0110111111 1011111111 01101011011 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 580
Words 107
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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