Analysis of You're My Drug



Your kisses leave me breathless
Leave me desperately wanting more
You're like a drug, addicting me
But this addiction I can't cure

Your hugs make my knees weak
Make me fall down to the ground
I find myself reaching out for you
Even when you're not around

Your touch gives me goosebumps
Sends shivers down my spine
I feel my whole body burn with heat
As our fingers intertwine

Your eyes strike me to my core
And every single nerve becomes aware
“You're my drug, my lifeline -
Don't leave me” I whisper in my silent prayer


Scheme ABXX XCXC ADXD BEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1101110 111000101 11010101 11010111 111111 1111101 11110111 1011101 11111 110111 111110111 11010001 1111111 01001010101 11111 11111001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 509
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on October 14, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Raven Rose

I write various poems pending on different topics, usually they can be positive and uplifting. My main inspiration is through my man. He has brought me more deeper into my writing capacity. He is my true love and my true dedication to me writing my poetry. I would love to give him a huge thank you for the everyday blessings for bringing me more further in publicizing my poetry more out into the open and facing my fears of bringing them more forward out into the world. more…

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