Analysis of Wouldn't It?

Michelle Borel

Love so sweet, love so devine, tastes so sweet, even if it's not mine...

If I could hold it in my pocket,
 then when the battery's drained plug it in a socket? -

That would be great! Wouldn't it?
 Would it not be great...
 Great to love and be loved back...
 Great to have truth told in a way that is not 'matter of fact'...
 Great to sing this song on a track...
 Great to be filled with your love, which I now lack...

Wouldn't it?
 Would it not be great?

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Poetic Form
Metre 1111101111101111 111110110 11011110010 1111101 11111 1110111 111110011111011 11111101 11111111111 101 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 449
Words 91
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 6, 2
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on January 25, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Michelle Borel

Proud to be from the beautiful twin isle of Trinidad and Tobago... One of my very first pieces was published when I was eight in one of Trinidad's daily newspapers. I believe that we must not bury our talents, but work on enhancing them. I started hosting shows at age eleven and by seventeen, I became a radio personality. Feel free to enjoy evenings with me from six to nine at www.1077musicforlife.com Together with that, I love the kitchen and my company Cookie Castle allows me to share the warmth and love I put into baking with others. Also, marketing seems to be another talent as I have held a regional position with an international brand regarding such a portfolio. However, I have saved the most important for the end of this bio - MY FAMILY :) I have three kids and I have been married now for nine years... Though on air I am known as Michelle Borel (maiden name), I take great pride in being Mrs. Thorpe! Peace and love to you and yours... Remember to put God first... Praise JAH and live!!! Would love to read my pieces live for you... You may contact me at 1(868)372-3877 or e-mail me at michelle_borel@hotmail.com more…

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