Analysis of With Us



I recall long ago, when I told you those words
But that all seems so lost in our times
With struggle and hardship, we fought for a chance
And with us, our souls intertwined

And time after time, through the thick and the thin
We fell and we rose all as one
Yet now has now pasted, and I stand here without you
But with us, we'll be never undone

These times I'm not proud of, these days I've been fallen
But your strength pulls me out through the pain
It's time to be strong, in these times that are dire
Cause with us, I will not turn away

No matter what happens, I'm always beside you
Your guardian soul or your friend
Just remember I love you, wherever life takes you
For with us, we remain till the end


Scheme XXXX XABA AXXX BCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11101111111 1111110101 11001011101 011101001 01101101001 11011111 1111100111011 111111001 111111111110 111111101 11111011111 111111101 11011011011 11001111 1010111010111 111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 689
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dan Pistachio

Besides writing poetry, Dan is an avid writer of fiction (especially genre fiction) and is currently attending classes at Slippery Rock University. more…

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