Analysis of With His Wish Fulfilled



When a Jill just went up to a hill
He could not do his usual thrill
Since he forgot to have his pill
Therefore could not do his drill
Was forced to return with a chill
Since he has no money for bill
Had to plead to that one to fulfill
Returned as if he had made a will
When she made him to just grill
Where he could show his own skill
Could not wait more since he got ill
Went back again running up the hill
On the way he took twice the same pill
And reached there EverReady to spill
First made all Ok regarding the bill
Went up and did a very solid long drill
Then returned back ready for a cool chill
Since he was happy with his wish fulfilled

Joyce © 20/08/2016 1: 43 PM


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Poetic Form
Metre 101111101 111111001 11011111 111111 11101101 11111011 111111101 011111101 1111111 1111111 11111111 110110101 101111011 011111 1111101001 11010101011 1011101011 1111011101 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 656
Words 141
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 18, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 265
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on August 23, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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