Analysis of Wishes



On Monday I wished that time moved more slowly,
Our weekend ended while i was settling in to it's grasp.
Now I want to skip the time between now and next Friday,
But I don't want to wish my life away.

I have wasted my affections on the undeserving,
They told me we were perfect and left with part of my heart.
I wish I knew what I wanted sooner,
But I wouldn't want to miss out on what I found.

Would I have been able to love in the past?
I'm not sure if I understood what was involved.
Would you have been ready for me last year?
Or were you busy becoming you?
I would say I wish I met you before I did,
But I could never wish away what I have...


Scheme AXAX XXXX XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111110 101101111000111 11111010110110 1111111101 1110101010010 11110010111111 1111111010 111011111111 11111011001 11111011101 1111101111 101100101 111111110111 11110101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 634
Words 135
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 164
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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