Analysis of Wiremu



I turn to look at you,
Eyes, so deep, so blue.
You smile at me,
As your mind, wonders free.
You are my special one,
My darling son,
My little man.
My biggest fan.

And as you lie sleeping,
I want you to awaken.
So I can once again dwell,
Under your little spell.
The sun shines with all its might,
Since you've entered into my life.
My hiki pea.
My cuddle bear,

With the miracle of light,
You came one night.
You told me a tale,
Of this strong male.
The man, you see,
Was your father to be.
My little angel,
My little savior.

You showed me a path,
Of a life that could last.
It changed my life,
Like a madman, with a knife.
Opened my eyes, you see,
A vision of whom I could be.
My iti potiki,
My youngest one.

But now you're here,
There's nothing to fear.
Cause those blue eyes,
Shine brighter than lights.
And the love I feel,
You cannot steal.
My bundle of joy,
My precious boy.

And as you grow,
I will know,
That there is something unusual,
Being sewn.
That there is a reason,
Its here, you belong.
My special child
My special one

And i look forward to that day,
That, “Mum, I love you”, you will say,
When you've grown into the man you've become,
Perhaps holding your own little son.
Telling me about all the love that you feel
As your life begins its own turn of the wheel.
My pride, My love,
My own beautiful, newborn son.


Scheme AABBCCDD ECFFGHBX GGIIBBJX XXHHBBEC XXXXKKLL MMJXCXXC NNXCKKXC
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11111 1111 111101 111101 1101 1101 1101 011110 1111010 1111011 101101 0111111 11100111 111 1101 1010011 1111 11101 1111 0111 111011 11010 11010 11101 101111 1111 101101 101111 01011111 111 1101 1111 11011 1111 11011 00111 1101 11011 1101 0111 111 11110010 101 111010 11101 1101 1101 01110111 11111111 1110101101 011011101 10101101111 11101111101 1111 11100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,276
Words 262
Sentences 25
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted by Neomortalgirl on September 01, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Geni Kelepouris

I began writing when i was 16. I enjoy expressing myself through all forms of art ( my profile pic is one of my art pieces). I have had a life full of tragedies and suffer post traumatic stress. I find that art and writing soothes my soul and allows me to heal from all the pain that has been haunting me. I have an obsession with existence and love nothing more than to discuss all the different theories of why we are here. My poems cover a range of topics from love and inspiration to complete random mania. There are also some very deep poems that i needed to write to get the sorrow from my life. I just hope whoever is reading them enjoys them. more…

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