Analysis of Who have I become



I'm standing
I'm thinking
I'm dreaming
Having outta body experience
trying to convince that it's ok
Crazy I feel
Hopeless I seem
can't put my finger on it, know what I mean?
play it over and over and over some more
soft lips soft skin
parts like me
but swags like he
movements so smooth
make me see blurry
wanting everything to hurry
to be back in your space
seeing smile in your face

what have I become

I've become a lover of you
never before had a view
of what this could be
see it in a different light
its something about you

excitement and wonder
at the feel of your touch
wanting so much....

to know
who have I become?


Scheme AAAXXXXXXXBBXBBCC D EEBXE XFF XD
Poetic Form
Metre 110 110 110 1010100100 101011111 1011 1011 11110111111 111001001011 1111 111 1111 1011 11110 1010110 111011 101011 11101 10101011 1001101 11111 11001001 110011 010010 101111 1011 11 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 596
Words 122
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 17, 1, 5, 3, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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