Analysis of While I …Before My Dusk .



While I read your poem Dearest ,
In  spirit I reach in your holy crest ,
I wish to take a faithful rest !

While I bathe in your transparent Face ,
I enjoy the showering of Heaven's grace ,
And forget by miracle my own trace !

While I stumble and stammer ,
To put a comment on your poem ,
In my soul's mirror flashes your name !

While a haggard of no profit importance ,
By the Ganges ,on dike ranges ,I am in trance ,
I wish to have you  , wish to love you ,breaking all fence !

While I see your soul , coming down in your finger ,
To paint  the ever cherished  crown ,-the Dearest ,
Jump I from my soul , for garland glory ,- life's best !

While in my timeless vacation ,
 I draw your image in my verse ,
Fell I it as the mammoth task ,
And ardently  invoke your spirit ,
So that I may finish that before my dusk !


Scheme ABB CCC DXX XXX DAB XXXXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111010 0101101101 11110101 111010101 10101001101 0011100111 1110010 110101110 011101011 10101110010 101011101101 1111111111011 111111010110 11010101010 111111101011 10110010 11110011 11110101 010001110 11111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 797
Words 153
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Subrata Ray

Ray subrata or Subrata Ray hails from the royal family of Nator ,-now Bangladesh . He is Headmaster of a Govt recognized 12-grade school in West Bengal ,-India ,-Moula Netagi Vidyalaya . He is double M.A English ,-literature and language . Poet ray is a global poet with about 1400 poems in the prestigious American poems ,-poetry site , Poem hunter , and Face Book . Poet ray is an eminent critic on Shakespeare , Osborne , Wordsworth , Shelly , Coolidge , Keats , Elliot , and many other poets and dramatists . Ray is a published author on History of English literature and language , English Grammar and language .He has published poetry books ,-on Love poems , Mystic poems , etc . more…

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