Analysis of When two become one.



Words can't describe. The sunrise. The sunset as she lies. On my chest due west. She being the moon. Crescent, or full. The devil inside me vanish like flames. But the blame. The blame lies with me.

Sorry doesn't begin. Simply I can't win. Its too late. Wait. Say it. Its never too late. I crave redemption.

Death toll. One. Resurrection. Resume. Flume.

Ever the gentleman and she. The moon. Always clear, always bright. Not always in sight. But she's there.

The truth. I'm not the sun. Nor is she the moon. She is my heart, my body, my soul.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101010111111111110011011010011101110101111 101001101111111111101111010 111010011 100100010111111101111 01110111101111111011
Characters 545
Words 101
Sentences 31
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 81
Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Foyez Syed

I am 20 years old. My love of poetry comes from writing to my friends. A lot of my poems I write when I can't go to sleep. I hope to offer something unique and alternative.My blog will give a better insight of me. www.mothermeetsmankind.wordpress.com more…

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