Analysis of what have we done



what have we done
it is a crying shame
we are killing the world
it can never be the same

day after day
we kill a little more
it shouldnt be like this
it is not what we are born for

gods getting angry
he hashad enough
he will kill everyone and everyone
the whole lot

and when you are in heaven
you ask him why
he will tell you what you did
and why you had to die

but then is to late
thers no going back
the world will be dead
cold dark and black


Scheme ABXB XCXC XXAX ADXD XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1111 110101 111001 1110101 1101 110101 11111 11111111 11010 1101 11110010 011 0111010 1111 1111111 011111 11111 11101 01111 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 425
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on September 29, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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