Analysis of Waves



My breath sends shivers over the blue waves
as they swirl up and collapse on the shore
It's deep with secrets, hushed by the under toe
as it coughs up shells on the cold beach
I feel your pull like the ocean tide, I reach
closing my eyes, I'll trust you on a whim
But I fear the question on my salty lips:
Will you let me sink or swim?


Scheme ABCDDEFE
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010011 1111001101 11110110101 111111011 11111010111 1011111101 11101011101 1111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 328
Words 70
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 70
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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