Analysis of War and Peace (haiku)



With words full of rage
I blow to strike down my foe,
Victory is here.

Many months of war
Has left the sand soaked in blood,
And sin fills the air.

My soldiers are brave
Though we know our foe is strong,
Still I keep my faith.

When at last we rise
And the war has come to end,
Our eyes turn to home.

Leave behind the death
And welcome in the new life,
This life is of peace.


Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXX XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 11111 1111111 10011 10111 1101101 01101 11011 11110111 11111 11111 0011111 101111 10101 0100011 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 360
Words 79
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on April 15, 2017

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Mark William Scott

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