Analysis of Wanted Sacrifice



The days are growing longer
My body has been frozen in a somewhat comatose state
The ejection has failed
Ejection cannot be deployed
Fetal abandonment has been delayed
Arms and legs have been removed
But the head and torso still remains
Embedded deep within
This accursed being refuses to leave
It is forever attached
Growing and growing
Feeding
It feeds within me
Leeching my very being
Absorbing  the essence
I grow despondent
As I bleed and bleed
Begging for this creature to flee
The fetal desertion shall not proceed
This being
This thing is slowly consuming me
Surely I shall die
But to die will mean failure
This monster shall be removed
It is my wanted sacrifice


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKKLKMNOLOKLPAFQ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 0111010 11011100011101 001011 01010101 1001001101 1011101 10101101 010101 111001011 1101001 10010 10 11011 111010 010010 11010 11101 10111011 0100101101 110 111100101 10111 1111110 1101101 1111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 646
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 553
Words per stanza (avg) 118
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Submitted by emmanuela.78162 on September 14, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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