Analysis of Waning



Strutting cocky, sure and rocky,
Song upon the tongue.
Hands in pocket, head in rocket,
Not easily outdone.

Legs grow tired, thickening mire,
A false note in the air.
Eyes grow weary, road turns dreary,
Confidence still there.

One leg short, painfully walk,
The song becomes a hum.
Spectacles born, a coat to warm,
Faint, the sound of the drum.

Both legs lame, stricken with pain,
The hum becomes a groan.
Heart in pieces, sorrow increases,
Suffering all alone.

Legs both dumb, completely numb,
Silence the only sound left.
Sparkle of light, fantasy flight,
Life the victim of theft.


Scheme AXXX XBAB XCXC XDXD CEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 10101010 10101 10101010 110011 11101001 011001 11101110 10011 1111001 010101 10010111 101101 1111011 010101 101010010 100101 1110101 1001011 10111001 101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 564
Words 99
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on December 25, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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