Analysis of Walk With Me

Elias Obaid

My dreams never comes true
When it's about you...

My wishes never relize life
Even if I strongly strive...

My days never relize light
Because you are out of my sight...

But again.. i always remind myself and say..
look where she can be..
even if she is not the one for me...

look there and watch what she do...
because.. it looks she is doing better without you..

Yes.. let go and be ..
Be the one who walks only with me..

Scheme AA XX BB XCC AA CC
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 11011 1101011 1011101 111011 01111111 1011101101 11111 1011110111 1101111 0111111010011 11101 101111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 410
Words 82
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted on July 28, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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