Analysis of waiting
II WAITING II SATYA PATTNAIK
Someone is calling me
Not to my mortal body
But to my soul
In language clear
Very close to my heart
Waiting me since long
From the day of my judgment
In my hose of flesh and bones
My passion burnt and grew old
Winds clouds and seasons
Washed out
The path of my desires
And pushed the time away
Leaving the fearless breath for me
Then I felt every cell of mine
Is budding newly
Possessing immortal glow
Suddenly her calling became louder
Light flushed out like a morning star
Waiting finished
My breath turned into eternity.
Scheme | ABBCDEAFGHIJKLBMBNOPQB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101101 11101 1111010 1111 0101 101111 10111 1011110 0111101 1101011 11010 11 0111010 010101 10010111 111100111 11010 0100101 1000100110 11110101 1010 111010100 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 546 |
Words | 103 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 449 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 116 |
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Submitted on February 02, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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