Analysis of The Star

Edith Nesbit 1858 (Kennington, Surrey ) – 1924 (New Romney, Kent)



I HAD a star to sing by, a beautiful star that led,
But when I sang of its splendour the world in its wisdom said:
'Sweet are your songs, yet the singer sings but in madness when
He hymns but stars unbeholden of us his fellows of men;
Glow-worms we see and marshlights; sing us sweet songs of those
For the guerdons we have to give you, laurel and gold and rose;
Or if you must sing of stars, unseen of your brother man,
Go, starve with your eyes on your vision; your star may save if it can!'

So I said, 'If I starve and die I never again shall see
The glory, the high white radiance that hallows the world for me;
I will sing their songs, if it must be, and when I have golden store,
I will turn from the marsh and the glow-worms, and sing of my star once more.'
So I walked in the warm wet by-ways, not daring to lift my eyes
Lest love should drive me to singing my star supreme in the skies,
And the world cried out, 'We will crown him, he sings of the lights that are,
Glories of marshlight and glow-worms, not visions vain of a star!'

I said, 'Now my brows are laurelled, my hands filled full of their gold,
I will sing the starry songs that these earthworms bade withhold.
It is time to sing of my star!' for I dreamed that my star still shone,
Then I lifted my eyes in my triumph. Night! night! and my star was gone.


Scheme AABBCCDD EEFFGGHH IIXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011110100111 11111110101101 11111010110101 111111111011 111101111111 10111111100101 11111110111101 1111111101111111 111111011100111 0100111001100111 1111111110111101 11110100110111111 1110011111101111 111111101101001 0011111111110111 10110111101101 11111111111111 1110101111101 1111111111111111 11101101101101111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,313
Words 271
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 337
Words per stanza (avg) 88
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Edith Nesbit

Edith Nesbit (married name Edith Bland) was an English author and poet; she published her books for children under the name of E. Nesbit. She wrote or collaborated on more than 60 books of children's literature. She was also a political activist and co-founded the Fabian Society, a socialist organisation later affiliated to the Labour Party. more…

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