Analysis of Vampire of bats....



Cloud towers by ghostly, Mansions
Shadows, thickening like talons
Scrapes from back, reaching
and the bats
                  fly away...
Witjout me, that they wanted.
Scathed and untreated
Bubbles of blood
The smear of moon
in drifts of clouds...
Hunger, bitting at me...
Like terrific songs unwritten
and poems without an ending...
Unknowing, I creep to the ledge
of balconey...
And swell the tides
Crashing, against the rocks
below...
My precipice, beside the
Oceans, wooded reach...

And I dive...

One, with them...


Scheme AABXXCXCDXXXBXDXXXXX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011010 1100110 11110 001 101 111110 10010 1011 0111 0111 101011 10101010 01001110 01011101 11 0101 100101 01 1100010 10101 011 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 496
Words 80
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 20, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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