Analysis of Unwelcomed Interlude



Graceful breaths, gliding across my face like a silken scarf;
Encasing my thoughts, delving into the depths of ecstasy.
Mortality amuses itself as my breath is repeatedly stolen; I bask in it.
I watch as playful dewdrops, together skate across her skin and merge, as if in mimicry.
Their path of exploration leads me to pursue their trail.
Breaths deepen; gusts of spasmodic praises greet an anxious dancer,
as nasal hums suffuse the air with a refrain of bliss.
Every rhythm, every touch, each kiss made as if it were the last.
Days will feel like a painful eternity apart, which a quick glance at a naked bed mockingly evokes.
I will patiently wait.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10110011110101 1111001011100 01000100111110100101101 1111010101010101110100 1110101110111 1101101010111010 11010101100111 100101001111111001 1111010010001101110101101 111001
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 642
Words 114
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 519
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Born and reside in Nassau, The Bahamas. Just rekindled his love for writing poetry in 2009 and enjoying it every bit.Don't really care bout the ratings though, just want to share his thoughts, feelings...... with whomever can bear to read 'em. He will, however, appreciate your comments and critique so he can improve wherever there is inadequacy.God Bless! more…

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