Analysis of Unkind Joke



Raised from the youth
I am misplaced among the living
Captured by stress and traffic
I release my anger amongst the crowd
Repressed, my feelings of bitterness wait
In time, I start the wheels of frustration
And my lightly toasted skin turns red
Deep red like the fury that awaits
Joking and faking a conversation
Waiting and waiting, SNAP
I have a target and they do not even know
They woke up this morning chipper and all
Three kids, a good husband, and Jesus
Kind, warm-hearted, and deserving
But they are none of these
Because I am hypnotized by the city's filth
I get closer and honk to distract
Get out of my car, gun in hand
And from this anger I have
I begin to react


Scheme ABCDEFGHFIJKLBMNOPQO
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101 110101010 1011010 1011100101 0111011001 0111011010 011010111 111010101 100100010 100101 110100111101 1111101001 110110010 11100010 111111 01111010101 111001101 11111101 0111011 101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 655
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 538
Words per stanza (avg) 127
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Submitted on July 04, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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