Analysis of Universal Love~



As we explore the barriers of self realization,
we need 2 deflect from the self hatred temtation.

bcuz if we cnt luv ourselves then we cnt luv the world
n tho we may nt c it thats important as girls.

As young women we're nuturers we're meant 2 guide souls,
ones who lose their way we're suposed 2 help those.

War goes around us n we thingk that it's gud
try 2 blame on the fact that we grew up in the hood.

But rly thats nt it we're jus tryna fit in, so long as it's kool we'll follow in sin.
But dnt let ne1 down u bcuz of ur race,
beauty will nvr b sumthing ufind in a face.

We're all individuals but we can all b gr8,
it's simply about wat u bring to the plate.

There wnt b any progresion if we all stand alone
we dnt even hav 2 sing on the same tone

You can speak 2 a beat, dance 2 ur own drum
so long as a beautiful song is wat we become

Universal luv is an expression of harmony
but nt necessarily forcing urself to conformity

We hav 2 find a balance b-tween ourselves and unity
So that our gr8ness can develope consistantly

The world defines love as any # of emotions
rel8ed to a strong sense of affection and a notion

Well i hav 2 disagree n i think this is where our problem lies
bcuz we dnt kno wat luv is 2 define it every1 tries

But u cnt define God He's sumthing our minds cnt fathem,
that doesnt mean however in our hearts we cnt hav Him

Thru drugs n abuse
we can still b strong
Thru rape n mockery
we cn still b strong
Thru the distrust tht comes w/ all of our problems
we hav luv...n therefore we cn b strong

-Rachel. R. U. Newman


Scheme AA BX XX BX XCC DX EE FF GG GX XA HH FX XIDIXI A
Poetic Form
Metre 11010100111010 1101101101 11111001111101 1111111101011 1110111111 111111111 11011111111 111011111001 11111111101111111001 1111111111 1011111001 110100111111 11001111101 111101111101 1110111011 111011111 1110100111101 0101110101100 11010010110100 111010110010100 111011111 010111101010 11101110100010 11100111111110101 11111110111001 1110111110111 1111001011111 11101 11111 111100 11111 100111100111010 11111111 101110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,513
Words 319
Sentences 12
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 6, 1
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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