Analysis of Un-perishable



Bubbling troubling thoughts
covering corpse ideas
sent to sanctuaries where graves lay

Easily the wind drifts this mind

Climb aboard and float away!

A photographic memory
taking pictures depicted in
this mans eyes
fantasizing a dream
in which we shall all come true

A gem to spend hours
formulating pearls to
unfold and form through brain storm
known to create creativity

Thee electricity
to write words in time
ten thousands volts
traveling through my spine
to find hands that moves this pen
to end the sands from sinking away

Thinking if we stay stained in ink
we shall all be immortal forever
whenever anyone reads us
bleeding blood stained poetry
to know it's we
on this piece of paper
evaporated in the ways that we think

In one blink to think

Even though our souls live on

Born from every word drawn from eyes

Realizing we will always be alive
even after we die

To all artist

We shall eternally exist...


Scheme XXA X A BXCXD XDXB BXXXXA EFXBBFE E X C XX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1001001 1001010 11100111 10001111 1010101 0010100 10100100 111 10001 0111111 011110 10011 0101111 11010100 10100 11101 1101 100111 1111111 110111001 10111101 1111010010 0101011 1011100 1111 111110 0100001111 01111 10110111 111001111 100111101 101011 1110 11010001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 913
Words 166
Sentences 3
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 1, 5, 4, 6, 7, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on April 23, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Razon Santos

From Yonkers N.YPuerto Rican nick name Razonquiet untill knownLoves God and family... more…

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