Analysis of Trixie (July 4, 1961 - August 30, 1971 (Beagle puppy - written the day she died)



Cute, tiny puppy with blackened nose,
In a litter of ten, it was she I chose;
She wagged her white tail so furiously,
And wondered around at all so curiously;
I took her gently from the man at the fair,
We looked at each other with gentle stare;
Holding her closer, she licked me on the nose,
This little girl, with furious tail, she I chose.

We took her home, and soon laid her to rest,
Soon as all was dark, she howled at her best;
The lights came on and down we came,
And there she was, wagging her tail just the same;
A gentle, tiny girl, she would run and hop,
Chasing an invisible bone, one ear would lop
Over the side, while the other would stand
On end, to hear for invaders to "her private land."

Training a dog named TRIX wasn't an easy job:
At heel or lying down, then bursting into the mob
Of people at the door, just looking for a friend,
Racing by pairs of feet, until by mine she'd end;
Running down the stairs and back up to see
Outside, then dinner calls, and racing back to me;
She's bury bones under dirt not there and drop,
With ears flopped and tail going, upon me with a plop.

The tiny grey head soon turned white, the small
Toned ears became black and the body was tall;
The paws grew bigger, the legs grew strong,
The eyes grew softer - and she wagged her tail all along;
We'd play together, talk, or go for a walk,
In wintertime snow, plowing thru on the stalk,
For any unknown thing: I loved her so,
But I didn't know how much 'till she had to go.


Scheme AABBCCAA DDEEFFGG HHIIBBFF JJKKLLMM
Poetic Form
Metre 110101101 00101111111 1101111000 010011111000 11010101101 1111101101 10010111101 110111001111 1101011011 1111111101 01110111 01111001101 01010111101 101010011111 1001101011 1111101010101 100111101101 1111011100101 110101110101 101111011111 1010101111 111101010111 11011011101 1110110011101 0101111101 11011001011 011100111 0111001101101 11010111101 0101101101 1100111101 111011111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,442
Words 291
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 281
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Submitted on May 08, 2015

Modified on April 11, 2023

1:28 min read
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Donald Loudon

I started to write because of the great feeling of release, and being able to do something of my own that I enjoyed. Since then, writing has become a way of life for me, and I enjoy it thoroughly. I write about things I feel strongly and or know a lot about. more…

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