Analysis of Too Much Peace



The black waters stay still.
Life drained away.
Nothing can survive here.
Oil killed the day.
The sea has died.
Too much peace in the waters of the gulf.
Too much peace for me.


Scheme ABCBDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 011011 1101 101011 1101 0111 1110010101 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 170
Words 34
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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