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You and I

doodlegirl

I'm sick of writing
Fictional love poems
Of what I want.
I'm ready to start
Writing love poems
That are really truly
About you and I.
I hate that
I don't know who you are.
I want to find you.
Please let me find you.
I'm not kidding when I say
I'm ready for you and I.
I'm lost
And alone.
I need you.
Who are you?
I'm more than ready
For you and I.
You're making my heart break.
I need you more than ever.
I need you.
I need you and I.
You are my oxygen.
The water that I drink.
You are my pail moon
Filling my life with light.
But where are we...
You and I?
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 14, 2023

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doodlegirl

I'm 13. I love Journey to the Past, Hey There Delilah, and Once Upon a December. I love the movies Scott Pilgrim VS The World and Anastasia."Life is one grand, sweet song, so start the music." ~Ronald Reagan"Life's greatest tragedy is not that it will someday end, but that most only live to follow directions and sometimes we end up totally lost." ~ Alex Gaskarth"Our character is what we do when we think no one is looking." ~ H. Jackson Brown, Jr."Our street corners keep secrets, and our road signs only suggest, never deciding for us, never knowing if the destination to which they lead is where we truly belong." ~ Alex GaskarthAwesome youtube video(s) of the week: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dCmRIFVH4O4&feature=player_embedded http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FV-HPOHu8mY more…

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